VPIM v2 Comments


Janusz Maruszak (marusj@nortelnetworks.com)
Wed, 16 May 2001 14:40:04 -0400


The draft looks good. I have a three minor comments.

- 4.2.6, RECEIVE RULES: I find this section a bit vague. First, it is not
clear why there would be "further delivery errors" after the system has
received the message - please clarify. Second, the meaning of "the message
is acknowledged" is vague - does this mean: accepted by the receiving system
in the SMTP session? anything else?

- 4.2.12: should be organized into SEND section and RECEIVE sections

- In the conformance table, I still see "Content-Langauge" (i.e. misspelled
Language).

Regards,
Janusz Maruszak
Nortel Networks



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